Friday, February 22, 2008

Friday Flash Fiction: Just One Day

This story follows on from last week's Mercurial Nights.


Just One Day
By Gareth D Jones


This story has been re-written and is under submission.




Like last week's story, I feel there's potential for more development here. I'll add it to my list...

2 comments:

Greg said...

Great.

Very nice twist on "You gotta be careful what you wish for."

GLP said...

Interesting set-up and you're right, it needs further investigation... For instance, how would these creatures defend themselves against someone who wished they (the Mercurials) did not exist?

Or someone who wished all previous wishes were null and void...?

Or someone who wished the Universe to end...?

Lots of interesting story ideas here for you to explore.

Good stuff

GLP