I liked this up until the last sentence. I felt there was more to this story and it got cut off too soon. I expected a transaction - emotional, material, or spiritual - to occur between the characters. But maybe that's just because I was enjoying it up until that point and wanted to read more?
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I liked this up until the last sentence. I felt there was more to this story and it got cut off too soon. I expected a transaction - emotional, material, or spiritual - to occur between the characters. But maybe that's just because I was enjoying it up until that point and wanted to read more?
I like the pun on preposition / proposition. :D
That was accidental, but I liked it and decided to keep it.
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